The Drowsy Kaye

This is pretty epic right here. You are a natural poet. Keep it up.

Wow! This is really deep! I can't stop thinking about it! Great Job once again! I'll try to review more of your stuff, though my schedule is mighty full. :D ...

WOW. This was pretty good. Kinda creepy at times, but that doesn't matter. It was awesome. Keep up the good work!

I would really appreciate it if anyone were to comment on this story. Thank you.

Shit, I'm falling. Turns out there was a seemingly bottomless pit behind the wall of light. Go figure. The walls of the pit seem to be made up of rock, ...

I've been diagnosed with a deadly disease that should kill me pretty soon. My life's not that great anyways. I work at a car dealership. I've only sold 3 cars ...

Hey Chernobyl! I had no idea what this is, but I loved every second of it!! Just, the language of the piece, the personal torment of the central character, even ...

This is pretty crazy. But I say that in a good way. I really like the whole crazy, schizophrenia thing you got going on. And the abrupt ending adds to ...

So, yeah, I'm just addicted to writing. So, I WILL review other's peoples work, but this, idea just popped into my head, and I had to put it on here ...

A very nice way of expressing feelings concerning this matter. I've seen poems in this sort of structure, and many times, they don't work. But here, it's just perfect. Keep ...

WOW. I really liked that! The way that you use a lack of a numerical value, and just use "nth," really make the piece very different, in a good way. ...

Hello! While this could be an interesting story, there are way, WAY, too many grammar, and punctuation mistakes for it to be taken seriously. It's possible that you are from ...

This was originally part of a novel I was writing that included the main character of Derek, from my other short story. I realized that this didn't really make sense ...

Excellent first chapter! A very compelling read! Though, there were various typos, too many to list here, but either way, I can;t wait to see what else is in store ...

I will also review this story as a way of thanking you for reviewing mine. I also didn't really quite understand the story, but for someone who is, apparently, 16 ...